Sonnet 119

The unseen, distant guns in silence fall—
Time now for me to reckon with my pain;
And next to me my mate who gave his all,
Face down, in puddles from a recent rain.
I lift my coat to see if blood has stopped,
To see how much of my young flesh is gone;
Aghast, I find my rifle has been dropped—
Into the mud—my blood now pooling on.
The gun on which my very life depends
Corrupted now by earth admixed with blood;
Its barrel choked by dirt it did defend—
Perhaps no more to serve my mortal good.
Mud, blood, my friend—and still I smile to see
A bird in flight, soft singing sweet to me.

© Loubert S Suddaby. All Rights Reserved.

One thought on “Sonnet 119

  1. Admixed…loved that. My soldier youth reacted immediately and, despite the snow on the ground outside, I thought of toes stained green from sweat and shoulders so sore from my ruck that if they had fallen off I would have sighed with relief. Made me stop a bit. Thanks.

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